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klay posted
I guess the copy is pretty much done.. I will play with it until @professorparsons takes it from me. Holler Eyes only right now. Post any serious feedback. It only makes me better no matter how nice/how cruel.
Going to turn this into a mini series I hope. The desire all around is there.. Could use a few more good crew members.
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Its up good buddy!
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The new cut looks good! Much cleaner in the beginning with less text. I think you could even simplify it a little more. Start out black screen, a little ambient noise, birds chirping – fade in “The disease had become an epidemic. The CDC couldn’t cure it, hell, they couldn’t even contain it in their own facilities.”
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