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    klay posted

    11 years ago

    Here is my third cut for episode 01. I am still trying to come up with a title for the series, and compile my story together.
    Tweaked the beginning, and also through in a logo sting I have been working on in After Effects for my so called company, “Hazardous Film.” The logo sting is still a work in progress. Feedback is appreciated for the revisions.

    [bpfb_video]http://vimeo.com/klaymaggard/r3d-ep01[/bpfb_video]

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    • The only concern I have is the audio, when there waling at times the sound of the steps and the music over power the conversation. As far as acting goes was pretty good, but your zombie needs to be much more vicious/scary looking, think he had a slight grin when you first showed him. Make him roll around in the dirt to get that look, have him groan and show more teeth(those gotta look nasty too). Lastly the cliff hanger, I was anticipating the blood and you cut me off… but does make me wanna watch the next to see what happened.

      • Thanks buddy! Most of that stuff goes back to the actual production process. Crew members were moving during static shots with dialogue, if you heard leaves rustling. The audio I tried to save but the ambience with the leaves rustling was just to overpowering.

        The zombie make up I did in like 30 minutes, and yes if you had watched the “bloopers” he laughed the whole time. I would love to get more effects out of it but it runs into a budget issue and time issue. On top of my poor skill level in that area.

        The next few episodes wont have any diseased ridden creatures…. Next one is setup going into town where there are already a few others who have setup camp.

        If my cliff hanger got you wanting to see the next one then I succeeded, I will learn more SFX along the way for the blood you desire.

        Thanks for the analysis.

        • If you can get Brian Dunn in your crew you would be in good shape for SFX, dunno how he does with blood and stuff but his masks are good.

          • Will try to recruit the best. Hoping I can knock out at least two more episodes. Have to go to Fort Knox for a month in June for ROTC assessment. Will be cut off with the internet world for far to long. Then it will recommence.

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