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Hannah Hamilton posted
I am from waterfalls ,from blue rivers ,and lakes
I am from apartment with double doors
I am from daisy and rose and the dandy lion bush
I am from game nights to baking night, from Tackett’s, parks, and Hamilton’s
I am from small house to big house
from don’t do this to don’t do that
I am from Louis Baptist church
I am from PH ,beans and cornbread
I am from baths in the kitchen sink to mammas homemade dresses, to smell of breakfast in the morning
I am from cold nights ,summer that changes ,the leafs and branches that hold me up55 Comments-
great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit it to a poetry magazine
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Beautifully written, great details, although you could have added a little more detail. Over all a beautiful poem.
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great job! I love your poem! You should submit it to a poetry magazine.
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, I would love to see you put this on an online forum for many people to read. Very exquisite.
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Nice poem! I can relate to most of it. With a little more work you should send it to a poem magazine!
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really nice poem
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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Really good!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Good job!! You should send it to a poem magazine! 🙂
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nice poem,it was very good and relates to a lot of people, you should this to poetry magazine…
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great work, you sound like your very smart you should submit this to poetry magazine
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Great job! I can relate to most of it! With a little more work you could enter this in a poem contest!
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This is a very good poem you sound like a very intelligent person from what I have read.
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great poem, good grammar, no things needed fixed
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Nice poem!! You should send it to poetry magazine.
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I love the way you have the first sentence! Very intriguing.
And how you are from apartments, I can relate to that. Try seeing if you can submit this to a poetry magazine. -
Very fun and descriptive details!
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Great poem! Very interesting. You should submit to a poetry magazine!
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I like your how professional your poem is. Its organized and obviously well thought out. Very impressive and I believe this could easy to see as a professional poem. Good job.
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nice detail! send this in
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Good job! you should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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Very well done! Very relatable. You could share this with an online poetry forum
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fantastic poem
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vary well done.you have done a amazing job. you should take it to a proffesional
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Thank you! 🙂
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Thank you 🙂
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great job
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good job! very good, i like your poem
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Thank you 🙂
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Great poem, i can relate to the baths in the kitchen sink when i was little. You should make your poem more public.
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thank you, and yeah it would be awesome 🙂
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Very good job and well thought out!
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Thank you so much!
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great job hannah
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great
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good job
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great
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Amazing Job Hannah
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thank youuuuu
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nice
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thanks (:
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good job
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thanks
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Very sweet, good job
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thanks
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this is really good!
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thank you 🙂
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I love daisies!!! I love your poem!
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thank you
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good job
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thank you
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Great job!!!!!!