Cave run sounds interesting!
I love the big snows and whatever comes along with winter. It is a very good poem, maybe see if you can submit it into a poetry magazine or contest?

Pancake art is very cool, love it!
Overall, nice poem! Maybe try submitting in a poetry contest?

I love the way you have the first sentence! Very intriguing.
And how you are from apartments, I can relate to that. Try seeing if you can submit this to a poetry magazine.

Excellent poem, very creative!
I like the way you used roses in your poem, along with the oak trees. Maybe enter online in a poetry forum.

I like the way you said, ” don’t talk the talk if you can’t walk the walk.” Very creative. I’d give it a 10/10! Maybe enter it in a poetry contest?

I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
Also, the way you used fried chicken, i love it! Maybe submit this to a poetry magazine?

very detailed, love it!

very detailed, love the roses!

i like how you sketched it out! nice details!