nice

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

Great job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good

Nice job!

This is beautiful! I really like the memories that you put into this! Maybe you should enter this in a poetry contest or a magazine. I’m sure they’ll enjoy this as much as I did!

Great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Very good! This needs to be submitted to a poetry magazine!

Very understanding. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Online forum is what this should go on!

very good job!

Love this poem, you seem to be a very happy person. You should write poems more often.

Pancake art is very cool, love it!
Overall, nice poem! Maybe try submitting in a poetry contest?

great poem, good grammar, no problems

good job!

Very nice poem

Nice poem! Nintendo and basketball is so true. Think about entering this in some contests.

Nice job! Very well done. You should consider sharing this on other websites

I really enjoyed your poem! Great work! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

Well said. The poem is well thought out and engaging. The format is very close to the template Lyon gives us, so it is well crafted. Well done.

Other than a few typing errors, I think you done really good on your poem.

Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Nice work! This is a very good poem!

i like it i like it

good job on the poem i like it when you said I am from the small mountainous, rugged land that smells like Earth. keep up the good work

Very relatable. Love chicken and cornbread lol. Keep up the good work!

Great job, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

very good! great job! i like your poem

Very nice poem, you and your family seem like you have a close bond with one another. You should think about writing more poems, or making this one known more.

great job

great

good job

I used to love Nintendo!