Nice job

nice

Very good. I like the lessons you put into your poem, very enticing. The best part of is about your family, makes it seem very personal.

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
Also, the way you used fried chicken, i love it! Maybe submit this to a poetry magazine?

Great poem, i also spent most of my time as a child at my grandmothers house.

very nice! I love the part about your grandmothers house and grandchildren’s memories! You’re a good writer!

Great poem, very nice. You should submit it to a poetry magazine

Very good! You need to think about being a writer!

I enjoyed reading this, very good poem. Wonderful Poem. Have you thought about putting this on an online forum?

Your grandparents seem really important to you, I really like your poem. Aside from you misspelling something, it’s perfect.

nice poem…

good poem, great word choice, no problems

Great poem! I spend a lot of time at grandparents house too! With some work this could be a great poem to enter in some contests!

Very great detail in this poem! I really enjoyed it! Nice job!

Nice! I really like your poem!

Very nice poem!! You should send this to poetry magazine.

Good job! Really enjoyable. You should post this on other websites as well

this is a good poem i really like the port where it said “I am from daisy, and from the I love you and I love you nots” and I like where you said “from “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover” and i would keep up the good work

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

great job!

good job! you should send this in

Nice poem! I really like this you should
submit this to a poetry magazine!!

Great poem, good job. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

good job!very good! i like your poem

Good detail and very enjoyable. Some very good quotes and sayings also!

Good poem, i was always told to not judge a book my its cover as well.

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nice poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

I think its impressive on how you include school and church into what makes you you. I think your family is a very important of your life looking at the poem.

my favorite where im from poem

I really like this!

Very good job! You’re a natural poet. I think you should consider posting this on other websites to share with everyone

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Excellent poem, very creative!
I like the way you used roses in your poem, along with the oak trees. Maybe enter online in a poetry forum.

You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Very enjoyable poem. Very exquisite. Have you had any thoughts on putting this in a magazine for poetry?

very good! send this out

Good job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good

great poem overall, great word choice, no problems

Good poem! I can relate to the soup beans part lol. You should think about entering it in a contest!

I really like it.

Nice job! You’re a great writer! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

good job!

Nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.

you should consider submiting your poem, its amazing

Nice work! Very good detail!

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

good job on the poem i like the line where you said from “Treat others equally” and “Focus on your education” keep up the good work

very great poem!

Nice poem, keep up the good work. You should send this in to a poetry magazine

very good! great job! i like your poem

Great writer and great poem. Nice work!

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Good Job

Beautiful.

This is great