Great job!!!!!!

great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit it to a poetry magazine

Beautifully written, great details, although you could have added a little more detail. Over all a beautiful poem.

great job! I love your poem! You should submit it to a poetry magazine.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, I would love to see you put this on an online forum for many people to read. Very exquisite.

Nice poem! I can relate to most of it. With a little more work you should send it to a poem magazine!

really nice poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

Really good!

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Good job!! You should send it to a poem magazine! 🙂

nice poem,it was very good and relates to a lot of people, you should this to poetry magazine…

great work, you sound like your very smart you should submit this to poetry magazine

Great job! I can relate to most of it! With a little more work you could enter this in a poem contest!

This is a very good poem you sound like a very intelligent person from what I have read.

great poem, good grammar, no things needed fixed

Nice poem!! You should send it to poetry magazine.

I love the way you have the first sentence! Very intriguing.
And how you are from apartments, I can relate to that. Try seeing if you can submit this to a poetry magazine.

Very fun and descriptive details!

I like your how professional your poem is. Its organized and obviously well thought out. Very impressive and I believe this could easy to see as a professional poem. Good job.

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Good job! you should submit this to a poetry magazine.

Very well done! Very relatable. You could share this with an online poetry forum

fantastic poem

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

good job! very good, i like your poem

Great poem, i can relate to the baths in the kitchen sink when i was little. You should make your poem more public.

Very good job and well thought out!

great job hannah

great

great

Amazing Job Hannah

nice

good job

Very sweet, good job

this is really good!

I love daisies!!! I love your poem!

good job

Nice job

nice

Very good. I like the lessons you put into your poem, very enticing. The best part of is about your family, makes it seem very personal.

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
Also, the way you used fried chicken, i love it! Maybe submit this to a poetry magazine?

Great poem, i also spent most of my time as a child at my grandmothers house.

very nice! I love the part about your grandmothers house and grandchildren’s memories! You’re a good writer!

Great poem, very nice. You should submit it to a poetry magazine

Very good! You need to think about being a writer!

I enjoyed reading this, very good poem. Wonderful Poem. Have you thought about putting this on an online forum?

Your grandparents seem really important to you, I really like your poem. Aside from you misspelling something, it’s perfect.

nice poem…

good poem, great word choice, no problems

Great poem! I spend a lot of time at grandparents house too! With some work this could be a great poem to enter in some contests!

Very great detail in this poem! I really enjoyed it! Nice job!

Nice! I really like your poem!

Very nice poem!! You should send this to poetry magazine.

Good job! Really enjoyable. You should post this on other websites as well

this is a good poem i really like the port where it said “I am from daisy, and from the I love you and I love you nots” and I like where you said “from “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover” and i would keep up the good work

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

great job!

good job! you should send this in

Nice poem! I really like this you should
submit this to a poetry magazine!!

Great poem, good job. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

good job!very good! i like your poem

Good detail and very enjoyable. Some very good quotes and sayings also!

Good poem, i was always told to not judge a book my its cover as well.

great job

great

great

Good job

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