Very lovely! Great job!!

Good job jami

I love it!

Good job, lovely poem

Amazing!!!!!

great job

good job

Love the last line!

Love this!

very good

very good

good job

Nice job

nice

Very good. I like the lessons you put into your poem, very enticing. The best part of is about your family, makes it seem very personal.

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
Also, the way you used fried chicken, i love it! Maybe submit this to a poetry magazine?

Great poem, i also spent most of my time as a child at my grandmothers house.

very nice! I love the part about your grandmothers house and grandchildren’s memories! You’re a good writer!

Great poem, very nice. You should submit it to a poetry magazine

Very good! You need to think about being a writer!

I enjoyed reading this, very good poem. Wonderful Poem. Have you thought about putting this on an online forum?

Your grandparents seem really important to you, I really like your poem. Aside from you misspelling something, it’s perfect.

nice poem…

good poem, great word choice, no problems

Great poem! I spend a lot of time at grandparents house too! With some work this could be a great poem to enter in some contests!

Very great detail in this poem! I really enjoyed it! Nice job!

Nice! I really like your poem!

Very nice poem!! You should send this to poetry magazine.

Good job! Really enjoyable. You should post this on other websites as well

this is a good poem i really like the port where it said “I am from daisy, and from the I love you and I love you nots” and I like where you said “from “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover” and i would keep up the good work

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

great job!

good job! you should send this in

Nice poem! I really like this you should
submit this to a poetry magazine!!

Great poem, good job. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

good job!very good! i like your poem

Good detail and very enjoyable. Some very good quotes and sayings also!

Good poem, i was always told to not judge a book my its cover as well.

great job

great

great

Good job