Cool poem.

Wonderful poem.

Very good! I love it!!

awesome poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

10/10 I like the details!

wonderful poem you did awsome

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

i like the way you think

Cool poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Online forum? you should put this on one.

Great poem!

good poem, great grammar, no problems

good job, very well written

Cave run sounds interesting!
I love the big snows and whatever comes along with winter. It is a very good poem, maybe see if you can submit it into a poetry magazine or contest?

Great poem! Chicken and candy is my favorite part! You should enter this in some poem contests!

Great job! You’re a good writer! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

I really like your poem, would’ve liked to of heard more though, more detail.

Although rather short, the poem sends its message to the reader all the same. I enjoyed your poem and I think you did a good job at the writing.

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Very nice poem!!

Cool poem! You done a great job. You should share this with other people online

Nice work! Coal keeps the lights on!

Nice job. Great poem hope to see more from you.

nice work send this in!

Great job, keep up the good work. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

cool poem! very good job! hope to see this in the textbooks one day

good job on the poem i like the first line I am from coal, from Pepsi and small TVs. keep up the good work

you done a really good job

very nice

great

Very beautiful poem!!!

beautiful