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nice poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

I think its impressive on how you include school and church into what makes you you. I think your family is a very important of your life looking at the poem.

my favorite where im from poem

I really like this!

Very good job! You’re a natural poet. I think you should consider posting this on other websites to share with everyone

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Excellent poem, very creative!
I like the way you used roses in your poem, along with the oak trees. Maybe enter online in a poetry forum.

You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Very enjoyable poem. Very exquisite. Have you had any thoughts on putting this in a magazine for poetry?

very good! send this out

Good job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good

great poem overall, great word choice, no problems

Good poem! I can relate to the soup beans part lol. You should think about entering it in a contest!

I really like it.

Nice job! You’re a great writer! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

good job!

Nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.

you should consider submiting your poem, its amazing

Nice work! Very good detail!

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

good job on the poem i like the line where you said from “Treat others equally” and “Focus on your education” keep up the good work

very great poem!

Nice poem, keep up the good work. You should send this in to a poetry magazine

very good! great job! i like your poem

Great writer and great poem. Nice work!

great job

great

good job

Good Job

Beautiful.

This is great

Beautiful