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Hannah Hamilton posted
Hola!, me amo Hannah Hamilton
tengo quince anos
soy de wheelwright
soy comica, paciente,amable.
soy el pelo corto y el pelo liso. el pelo castano.
no me gusta vajar y hacer la tarea y tomar beber.
me gusta pasor el rato con los amigos y ver television, y ir de compras. cociar.
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Breanna posted
I am from a notebook, from lays and tostitos.
I am from a blanket, warm and comfy, that kept me and my family out of the cold during winter nights.
I am from the daisy, and from the I love yous and I love you nots.
I am from Sunday breakfasts with mamaw and humorous moments, from Mamaw Geraldine, my cousin Josh, and my mother Laura.
I am from the…Read More34 Comments-
nice
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Very good. I like the lessons you put into your poem, very enticing. The best part of is about your family, makes it seem very personal.
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
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Great poem, i also spent most of my time as a child at my grandmothers house.
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very nice! I love the part about your grandmothers house and grandchildren’s memories! You’re a good writer!
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit it to a poetry magazine
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Very good! You need to think about being a writer!
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I enjoyed reading this, very good poem. Wonderful Poem. Have you thought about putting this on an online forum?
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Your grandparents seem really important to you, I really like your poem. Aside from you misspelling something, it’s perfect.
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nice poem…
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good poem, great word choice, no problems
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Great poem! I spend a lot of time at grandparents house too! With some work this could be a great poem to enter in some contests!
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Very great detail in this poem! I really enjoyed it! Nice job!
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Nice! I really like your poem!
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Very nice poem!! You should send this to poetry magazine.
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Good job! Really enjoyable. You should post this on other websites as well
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this is a good poem i really like the port where it said “I am from daisy, and from the I love you and I love you nots” and I like where you said “from “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover” and i would keep up the good work
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Nice poem! Very unique. You should send into a poetry magazine!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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great job!
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amazing great job.you did wonderful.you should send this
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good job! you should send this in
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Nice poem! I really like this you should
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Great poem, good job. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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good job !very good job!
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good job!very good! i like your poem
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Good detail and very enjoyable. Some very good quotes and sayings also!
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Good poem, i was always told to not judge a book my its cover as well.
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great job
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great
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Good job
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Rheannah Spurlock posted
i am from a straightener from my sisters room, and where we never failed to make timeless memories.
i am from an unknown hill, with a fresh smell of gunpowder, and a sight my momma would die for.
i am from dirt, and from the stains and bruises it leaves on me from sliding in to home.
i am from beach trips every year, and strict sterns from poppa…Read More40 Comments-
nice poem
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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Very nice! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!
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Very heartfelt!
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very nice! you should really put this out
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I like the way you said, ” don’t talk the talk if you can’t walk the walk.” Very creative. I’d give it a 10/10! Maybe enter it in a poetry contest?
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Great poem! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!
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This is great! You should submit this where it can be published somewhere!
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Well written, very heartfelt, love the details you added into your writing.
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Very enjoyable and realistic poem. I liked this one a’lot. Any thoughts on putting this on an online forum?
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Great job! The last part is very touching. You should consider submitting this to a poetry magazine
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I enjoyed how you put your experience into your upbringing. Most people just look at their area instead of events that shaped your life. This makes it more personal for the reader and makes it more involving.
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I love this! I really enjoyed the part where you talked about making timeless memories. You should submit this to a poetry magazine! You’re a great writer.
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You should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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I like it, you seem like a strong person. Maybe try submitting it to a site about poems.
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good poem, great grammar, no problems
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nice poem
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Great job you should send your poem to a poetry magazine
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Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contes.
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Nice work telling about your family and not to be a follower but a leader!
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good job on the poem i like the line i am from here to there & there to home. you should put this in a magazine
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You should submit into a poetry magazine. Very very nice!
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Great Poem!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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good job!
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amazing job.you did wonderful
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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good job!very good! i like your poem
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good job!
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Nice work! I like the line i am from here to there & there to home.
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Great job I you should consider sending this to a poetry contest!
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Great poem, very heartfelt, and very nice details you put into your work.
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great job
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great
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great
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Great job very emotional
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good job 🙂
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I love this so much it’s great!!
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I really love yours, it is very detailed. (:
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Kaylie Edwards posted
I am from double-wide trailers, from great value and Downy.
I am from the two gardens in the yard, dirty, difficult, rabbits hopping around trying to steal the food.
I am from the Roses, the oak trees towering over 100 feet
I am from Christmas dinner and surprises, from Papaw Mike and Mamaw Marcia and Granny Cook.
I am from the arguments and…Read More36 Comments-
Me gusta chica
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nice poem
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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I think its impressive on how you include school and church into what makes you you. I think your family is a very important of your life looking at the poem.
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my favorite where im from poem
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I really like this!
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Very good job! You’re a natural poet. I think you should consider posting this on other websites to share with everyone
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Excellent poem, very creative!
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You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Very enjoyable poem. Very exquisite. Have you had any thoughts on putting this in a magazine for poetry?
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very good! send this out
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Good job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good
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great poem overall, great word choice, no problems
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Good poem! I can relate to the soup beans part lol. You should think about entering it in a contest!
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I really like it.
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Nice job! You’re a great writer! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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good job!
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good job!
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Nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.
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you should consider submiting your poem, its amazing
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Amazing!! You should enter in a poetry magazine!
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Nice work! Very good detail!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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very wonderful . you did amazing
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good job on the poem i like the line where you said from “Treat others equally” and “Focus on your education” keep up the good work
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very great poem!
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Nice poem, keep up the good work. You should send this in to a poetry magazine
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very good! great job! i like your poem
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Great writer and great poem. Nice work!
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great job
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great
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good job
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Good Job
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Beautiful.
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This is great
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Randall Page posted
I am from corn stalks in the field, from Nintendo and basketball.
I am from the small mountainous, rugged land that smells like Earth.
I am from the rose bush at the cemetery, the golden rods in the field.
I am from pancake art in the morning and adventure in the evenings, from Sharon and Bobby and Page’s.
I am from the laughter at the diner…Read More37 Comments-
nice
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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Great job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good
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Nice job!
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This is beautiful! I really like the memories that you put into this! Maybe you should enter this in a poetry contest or a magazine. I’m sure they’ll enjoy this as much as I did!
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Great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Very good! This needs to be submitted to a poetry magazine!
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Very understanding. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Online forum is what this should go on!
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very good job!
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Love this poem, you seem to be a very happy person. You should write poems more often.
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Pancake art is very cool, love it!
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great poem, good grammar, no problems
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good job!
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nice work! send this in
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Very nice poem
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Nice poem! Nintendo and basketball is so true. Think about entering this in some contests.
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Nice job! Very well done. You should consider sharing this on other websites
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I really enjoyed your poem! Great work! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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Well said. The poem is well thought out and engaging. The format is very close to the template Lyon gives us, so it is well crafted. Well done.
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Nice poem! Very unique & interesting. You should consider entering this is a poetry contest.
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Other than a few typing errors, I think you done really good on your poem.
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Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Nice work! This is a very good poem!
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well done.you did wonderful.great job
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i like it i like it
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good job on the poem i like it when you said I am from the small mountainous, rugged land that smells like Earth. keep up the good work
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Very relatable. Love chicken and cornbread lol. Keep up the good work!
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lol nice
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Great job, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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very good! great job! i like your poem
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Very nice poem, you and your family seem like you have a close bond with one another. You should think about writing more poems, or making this one known more.
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great job
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Good Poem
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great
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good job
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I used to love Nintendo!
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Nice job