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Randall Page posted
I am from corn stalks in the field, from Nintendo and basketball.
I am from the small mountainous, rugged land that smells like Earth.
I am from the rose bush at the cemetery, the golden rods in the field.
I am from pancake art in the morning and adventure in the evenings, from Sharon and Bobby and Page’s.
I am from the laughter at the diner…Read More37 Comments-
excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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Great job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good
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Nice job!
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This is beautiful! I really like the memories that you put into this! Maybe you should enter this in a poetry contest or a magazine. I’m sure they’ll enjoy this as much as I did!
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Great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Very good! This needs to be submitted to a poetry magazine!
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Very understanding. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Online forum is what this should go on!
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very good job!
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Love this poem, you seem to be a very happy person. You should write poems more often.
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Pancake art is very cool, love it!
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great poem, good grammar, no problems
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good job!
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nice work! send this in
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Very nice poem
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Nice poem! Nintendo and basketball is so true. Think about entering this in some contests.
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Nice job! Very well done. You should consider sharing this on other websites
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I really enjoyed your poem! Great work! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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Well said. The poem is well thought out and engaging. The format is very close to the template Lyon gives us, so it is well crafted. Well done.
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Nice poem! Very unique & interesting. You should consider entering this is a poetry contest.
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Other than a few typing errors, I think you done really good on your poem.
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Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Nice work! This is a very good poem!
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well done.you did wonderful.great job
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i like it i like it
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good job on the poem i like it when you said I am from the small mountainous, rugged land that smells like Earth. keep up the good work
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Very relatable. Love chicken and cornbread lol. Keep up the good work!
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lol nice
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Great job, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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very good! great job! i like your poem
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Very nice poem, you and your family seem like you have a close bond with one another. You should think about writing more poems, or making this one known more.
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great job
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Good Poem
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great
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good job
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I used to love Nintendo!
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Janna Caudill posted
I am from coal,from Pepsi and Small TVs.
I am from the smaller homes that seem out of place
I am from the big snows, the cold winters
I am from camping and dark hair, from Janet and Garrie and Caudills
I am from trips to cave run and cooking
I`m from Kentucky, chicken and candy
From the long car rides to Camden Park, the holiday dinners and the…Read More34 Comments-
Cool poem.
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Wonderful poem.
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Very good! I love it!!
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awesome poem
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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10/10 I like the details!
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wonderful poem you did awsome
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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i like the way you think
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Cool poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Online forum? you should put this on one.
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Great poem!
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good poem, great grammar, no problems
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good job, very well written
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Cave run sounds interesting!
I love the big snows and whatever comes along with winter. It is a very good poem, maybe see if you can submit it into a poetry magazine or contest? -
Great poem! Chicken and candy is my favorite part! You should enter this in some poem contests!
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Great job! I can relate so much. You should enter this into a poetry magazine!
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Great job! You’re a good writer! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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I really like your poem, would’ve liked to of heard more though, more detail.
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Although rather short, the poem sends its message to the reader all the same. I enjoyed your poem and I think you did a good job at the writing.
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Very nice poem!!
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Cool poem! You done a great job. You should share this with other people online
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Nice work! Coal keeps the lights on!
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Nice job. Great poem hope to see more from you.
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very nice.you did wonderful
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nice work send this in!
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Great job, keep up the good work. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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cool poem! very good job! hope to see this in the textbooks one day
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good job on the poem i like the first line I am from coal, from Pepsi and small TVs. keep up the good work
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you done a really good job
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very nice
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great
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Very beautiful poem!!!
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beautiful
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Austin Fultz posted
My family isn’t very traditional, but we do have a few. The first tradition is we always eat at grandmas house on thanksgiving. The second tradition is the first one to reach for the turkey does the dishes. Third, we pray before every meal. Fourth, we always open gifts on Christmas eve so we have time to spend with family on Christmas day. That’s…Read More
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great
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great job!
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good job
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Rochelle Paguio posted
American Hollow
-positive aspect shows that they work hard to get money, and even though they struggling about life they remained to love each other no matter what and the negative aspect shows that its okay to them how Clintons talks to his parents/family.1 Comment-
nice work
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tessa posted
1 a lifelong tradition in our family has been to sit around and talk about life and all its problems it brings to us
2 a very cultural tradition in our family is to eat lots of food and spend alot of time with family we havent seen in a while
3 a very cultural tradition in my family is to go fishing and ride four wheelers
4 i believe this…Read More1 Comment-
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