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Breanna posted
I am from a notebook, from lays and tostitos.
I am from a blanket, warm and comfy, that kept me and my family out of the cold during winter nights.
I am from the daisy, and from the I love yous and I love you nots.
I am from Sunday breakfasts with mamaw and humorous moments, from Mamaw Geraldine, my cousin Josh, and my mother Laura.
I am from the stubbornness of my parents and the sweetness of my grandparents.
From “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover.”
I am from Old Regular Baptist and Sunday church dinners.
I am from Floyd County and Melvin, cornbread and fried chicken.
From the mischievous adventures of my grandparents, the weddings that occur in their backyard, and the cold nights me and my family sat through at football games.
I am from the walls of my grandmothers house, where all of her grandchildren’s memories hang.34 Comments-
nice
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Very good. I like the lessons you put into your poem, very enticing. The best part of is about your family, makes it seem very personal.
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
Also, the way you used fried chicken, i love it! Maybe submit this to a poetry magazine? -
Great poem, i also spent most of my time as a child at my grandmothers house.
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very nice! I love the part about your grandmothers house and grandchildren’s memories! You’re a good writer!
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit it to a poetry magazine
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Very good! You need to think about being a writer!
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I enjoyed reading this, very good poem. Wonderful Poem. Have you thought about putting this on an online forum?
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Your grandparents seem really important to you, I really like your poem. Aside from you misspelling something, it’s perfect.
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nice poem…
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good poem, great word choice, no problems
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Great poem! I spend a lot of time at grandparents house too! With some work this could be a great poem to enter in some contests!
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Very great detail in this poem! I really enjoyed it! Nice job!
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Nice! I really like your poem!
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Very nice poem!! You should send this to poetry magazine.
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Good job! Really enjoyable. You should post this on other websites as well
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this is a good poem i really like the port where it said “I am from daisy, and from the I love you and I love you nots” and I like where you said “from “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover” and i would keep up the good work
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Nice poem! Very unique. You should send into a poetry magazine!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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great job!
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amazing great job.you did wonderful.you should send this
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good job! you should send this in
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Nice poem! I really like this you should
submit this to a poetry magazine!! -
Great poem, good job. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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good job !very good job!
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good job!very good! i like your poem
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Good detail and very enjoyable. Some very good quotes and sayings also!
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Good poem, i was always told to not judge a book my its cover as well.
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great job
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great
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great
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Good job
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