nice poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

Very nice! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!

Very heartfelt!

I like the way you said, ” don’t talk the talk if you can’t walk the walk.” Very creative. I’d give it a 10/10! Maybe enter it in a poetry contest?

Great poem! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!

This is great! You should submit this where it can be published somewhere!

Well written, very heartfelt, love the details you added into your writing.

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Very enjoyable and realistic poem. I liked this one a’lot. Any thoughts on putting this on an online forum?

Great job! The last part is very touching. You should consider submitting this to a poetry magazine

I enjoyed how you put your experience into your upbringing. Most people just look at their area instead of events that shaped your life. This makes it more personal for the reader and makes it more involving.

I love this! I really enjoyed the part where you talked about making timeless memories. You should submit this to a poetry magazine! You’re a great writer.

You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

I like it, you seem like a strong person. Maybe try submitting it to a site about poems.

good poem, great grammar, no problems

nice poem

Great job you should send your poem to a poetry magazine

Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contes.

Nice work telling about your family and not to be a follower but a leader!

good job on the poem i like the line i am from here to there & there to home. you should put this in a magazine

Great Poem!

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

good job!

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

good job!very good! i like your poem

Nice work! I like the line i am from here to there & there to home.
from always hearing “remember your standards” or “be a leader not a follower.”

Great job I you should consider sending this to a poetry contest!

Great poem, very heartfelt, and very nice details you put into your work.

great job

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Great job very emotional

good job 🙂

I love this so much it’s great!!

I really love yours, it is very detailed. (:

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nice poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

I think its impressive on how you include school and church into what makes you you. I think your family is a very important of your life looking at the poem.

my favorite where im from poem

I really like this!

Very good job! You’re a natural poet. I think you should consider posting this on other websites to share with everyone

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Excellent poem, very creative!
I like the way you used roses in your poem, along with the oak trees. Maybe enter online in a poetry forum.

You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Very enjoyable poem. Very exquisite. Have you had any thoughts on putting this in a magazine for poetry?

very good! send this out

Good job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good

great poem overall, great word choice, no problems

Good poem! I can relate to the soup beans part lol. You should think about entering it in a contest!

I really like it.

Nice job! You’re a great writer! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

good job!

Nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.

you should consider submiting your poem, its amazing

Nice work! Very good detail!

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

good job on the poem i like the line where you said from “Treat others equally” and “Focus on your education” keep up the good work

very great poem!

Nice poem, keep up the good work. You should send this in to a poetry magazine

very good! great job! i like your poem

Great writer and great poem. Nice work!

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Good Job

Beautiful.

This is great

nice

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

Great job you should submit your poem to a poetry magazine its really good

Nice job!

This is beautiful! I really like the memories that you put into this! Maybe you should enter this in a poetry contest or a magazine. I’m sure they’ll enjoy this as much as I did!

Great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Very good! This needs to be submitted to a poetry magazine!

Very understanding. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Online forum is what this should go on!

very good job!

Love this poem, you seem to be a very happy person. You should write poems more often.

Pancake art is very cool, love it!
Overall, nice poem! Maybe try submitting in a poetry contest?

great poem, good grammar, no problems

good job!

Very nice poem

Nice poem! Nintendo and basketball is so true. Think about entering this in some contests.

Nice job! Very well done. You should consider sharing this on other websites

I really enjoyed your poem! Great work! You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

Well said. The poem is well thought out and engaging. The format is very close to the template Lyon gives us, so it is well crafted. Well done.

Other than a few typing errors, I think you done really good on your poem.

Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contest.

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

Nice work! This is a very good poem!

i like it i like it

good job on the poem i like it when you said I am from the small mountainous, rugged land that smells like Earth. keep up the good work

Very relatable. Love chicken and cornbread lol. Keep up the good work!

Great job, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

very good! great job! i like your poem

Very nice poem, you and your family seem like you have a close bond with one another. You should think about writing more poems, or making this one known more.

great job

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I used to love Nintendo!