nice poem

excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.

Very nice! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!

Very heartfelt!

I like the way you said, ” don’t talk the talk if you can’t walk the walk.” Very creative. I’d give it a 10/10! Maybe enter it in a poetry contest?

Great poem! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!

This is great! You should submit this where it can be published somewhere!

Well written, very heartfelt, love the details you added into your writing.

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

Very enjoyable and realistic poem. I liked this one a’lot. Any thoughts on putting this on an online forum?

Great job! The last part is very touching. You should consider submitting this to a poetry magazine

I enjoyed how you put your experience into your upbringing. Most people just look at their area instead of events that shaped your life. This makes it more personal for the reader and makes it more involving.

I love this! I really enjoyed the part where you talked about making timeless memories. You should submit this to a poetry magazine! You’re a great writer.

You should submit this to a poetry magazine.

I like it, you seem like a strong person. Maybe try submitting it to a site about poems.

good poem, great grammar, no problems

nice poem

Great job you should send your poem to a poetry magazine

Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contes.

Nice work telling about your family and not to be a follower but a leader!

good job on the poem i like the line i am from here to there & there to home. you should put this in a magazine

Great Poem!

Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!

good job!

Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine

good job!very good! i like your poem

Nice work! I like the line i am from here to there & there to home.
from always hearing “remember your standards” or “be a leader not a follower.”

Great job I you should consider sending this to a poetry contest!

Great poem, very heartfelt, and very nice details you put into your work.

great job

great

great

Great job very emotional

good job 🙂

I love this so much it’s great!!

I really love yours, it is very detailed. (: