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Hannah Hamilton posted
I am from waterfalls ,from blue rivers ,and lakes
I am from apartment with double doors
I am from daisy and rose and the dandy lion bush
I am from game nights to baking night, from Tackett’s, parks, and Hamilton’s
I am from small house to big house
from don’t do this to don’t do that
I am from Louis Baptist church
I am from PH ,beans and…Read More55 Comments-
great poem, keep up the good work. You should submit it to a poetry magazine
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Beautifully written, great details, although you could have added a little more detail. Over all a beautiful poem.
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great job! I love your poem! You should submit it to a poetry magazine.
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, I would love to see you put this on an online forum for many people to read. Very exquisite.
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Nice poem! I can relate to most of it. With a little more work you should send it to a poem magazine!
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really nice poem
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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Really good!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Good job!! You should send it to a poem magazine! 🙂
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nice poem,it was very good and relates to a lot of people, you should this to poetry magazine…
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great work, you sound like your very smart you should submit this to poetry magazine
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Great job! I can relate to most of it! With a little more work you could enter this in a poem contest!
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This is a very good poem you sound like a very intelligent person from what I have read.
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great poem, good grammar, no things needed fixed
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Nice poem!! You should send it to poetry magazine.
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I love the way you have the first sentence! Very intriguing.
And how you are from apartments, I can relate to that. Try seeing if you can submit this to a poetry magazine. -
Very fun and descriptive details!
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Great poem! Very interesting. You should submit to a poetry magazine!
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I like your how professional your poem is. Its organized and obviously well thought out. Very impressive and I believe this could easy to see as a professional poem. Good job.
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nice detail! send this in
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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Good job! you should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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Very well done! Very relatable. You could share this with an online poetry forum
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fantastic poem
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vary well done.you have done a amazing job. you should take it to a proffesional
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Thank you! 🙂
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Thank you 🙂
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great job
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good job! very good, i like your poem
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Thank you 🙂
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Great poem, i can relate to the baths in the kitchen sink when i was little. You should make your poem more public.
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thank you, and yeah it would be awesome 🙂
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Very good job and well thought out!
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Thank you so much!
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great job hannah
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great
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good job
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great
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Amazing Job Hannah
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thank youuuuu
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nice
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thanks (:
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good job
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thanks
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Very sweet, good job
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thanks
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this is really good!
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thank you 🙂
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I love daisies!!! I love your poem!
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thank you
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good job
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thank you
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Hannah Hamilton posted
Hola!, me amo Hannah Hamilton
tengo quince anos
soy de wheelwright
soy comica, paciente,amable.
soy el pelo corto y el pelo liso. el pelo castano.
no me gusta vajar y hacer la tarea y tomar beber.
me gusta pasor el rato con los amigos y ver television, y ir de compras. cociar.
555-5555
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Breanna posted
I am from a notebook, from lays and tostitos.
I am from a blanket, warm and comfy, that kept me and my family out of the cold during winter nights.
I am from the daisy, and from the I love yous and I love you nots.
I am from Sunday breakfasts with mamaw and humorous moments, from Mamaw Geraldine, my cousin Josh, and my mother Laura.
I am from the…Read More34 Comments-
Nice job
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nice
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Very good. I like the lessons you put into your poem, very enticing. The best part of is about your family, makes it seem very personal.
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excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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I like the sayings that you included in your poem, very nice!
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Great poem, i also spent most of my time as a child at my grandmothers house.
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very nice! I love the part about your grandmothers house and grandchildren’s memories! You’re a good writer!
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit it to a poetry magazine
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Very good! You need to think about being a writer!
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I enjoyed reading this, very good poem. Wonderful Poem. Have you thought about putting this on an online forum?
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Your grandparents seem really important to you, I really like your poem. Aside from you misspelling something, it’s perfect.
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nice poem…
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good poem, great word choice, no problems
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Great poem! I spend a lot of time at grandparents house too! With some work this could be a great poem to enter in some contests!
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Very great detail in this poem! I really enjoyed it! Nice job!
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Nice! I really like your poem!
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Very nice poem!! You should send this to poetry magazine.
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Good job! Really enjoyable. You should post this on other websites as well
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this is a good poem i really like the port where it said “I am from daisy, and from the I love you and I love you nots” and I like where you said “from “Be kind to everyone” and “Never judge a book by its cover” and i would keep up the good work
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Nice poem! Very unique. You should send into a poetry magazine!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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great job!
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amazing great job.you did wonderful.you should send this
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good job! you should send this in
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Nice poem! I really like this you should
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Great poem, good job. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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good job !very good job!
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good job!very good! i like your poem
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Good detail and very enjoyable. Some very good quotes and sayings also!
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Good poem, i was always told to not judge a book my its cover as well.
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great job
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great
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great
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Good job
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Great job!!!!!!