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Rheannah Spurlock posted
i am from a straightener from my sisters room, and where we never failed to make timeless memories.
i am from an unknown hill, with a fresh smell of gunpowder, and a sight my momma would die for.
i am from dirt, and from the stains and bruises it leaves on me from sliding in to home.
i am from beach trips every year, and strict sterns from poppa and momma as we would cause trouble in the back seat.
i am from here to there & there to home.
from always hearing “remember your standards” or “be a leader not a follower.”
i am from no friends over on saturday night if they don’t go to church.
i am from don’t talk the talk if you can’t walk the walk.
i am from where no one knows, where fightin’ and fussin’ was caused by our old folks.
i am from realizes life can pass in an instant, and almost losing your best friends in the blink of an eye. i am from laying in the hospital bed, hoping and prayer they were both still alive.
i am from always knowing families are forever. i am from love one another as He once did.40 Comments-
excellent poem, great word choice, i think you should share this poem elsewhere.
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Very nice! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!
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Very heartfelt!
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very nice! you should really put this out
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I like the way you said, ” don’t talk the talk if you can’t walk the walk.” Very creative. I’d give it a 10/10! Maybe enter it in a poetry contest?
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Great poem! I like the “love one another as He once did.” part! You should enter this in a poem contest!
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This is great! You should submit this where it can be published somewhere!
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Well written, very heartfelt, love the details you added into your writing.
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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Very enjoyable and realistic poem. I liked this one a’lot. Any thoughts on putting this on an online forum?
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Great job! The last part is very touching. You should consider submitting this to a poetry magazine
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I enjoyed how you put your experience into your upbringing. Most people just look at their area instead of events that shaped your life. This makes it more personal for the reader and makes it more involving.
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I love this! I really enjoyed the part where you talked about making timeless memories. You should submit this to a poetry magazine! You’re a great writer.
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You should submit this to a poetry magazine.
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I like it, you seem like a strong person. Maybe try submitting it to a site about poems.
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good poem, great grammar, no problems
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nice poem
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Great job you should send your poem to a poetry magazine
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Very nice poem!! You should enter this in a poetry contes.
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Nice work telling about your family and not to be a follower but a leader!
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good job on the poem i like the line i am from here to there & there to home. you should put this in a magazine
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You should submit into a poetry magazine. Very very nice!
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Great Poem!
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Very good! You should submit this to a poetry magazine!
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good job!
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amazing job.you did wonderful
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Great poem, very nice. You should submit this to a poetry magazine
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good job!very good! i like your poem
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good job!
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Nice work! I like the line i am from here to there & there to home.
from always hearing “remember your standards” or “be a leader not a follower.” -
Great job I you should consider sending this to a poetry contest!
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Great poem, very heartfelt, and very nice details you put into your work.
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great job
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great
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great
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Great job very emotional
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good job 🙂
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I love this so much it’s great!!
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I really love yours, it is very detailed. (:
nice poem